
Natalia was ready. She poured the Maxim coffee powder into the cup. She heard the footsteps of her math teacher. She started to sweat. She kept sweating. She shook the cup. There. She saw a bunch of tiny, white sweet rocks in the cup. It was tasty. She pulled out all of the white things. She pulled out the last tiny thing. Then, she heard a bell rang. Now, her trick will be tested. She poured the hot water over the cup. She gave it to her teacher, Annie Medlock. Annie drank that. Annie's face became white. Coffee was bitter.
I thoroughly enjoyed the drabble. You have a good feel for controlling the atmosphere of your writing through varying sentence length. Keep up the good work.
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